NeoAlchemist247's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[drunk lofi]

Meta af

[We Broke]

I love this. I feel this. I know this.

[Ice Cream (2019 Demo)]

5/5

[Barney Rubble (feat. Kawai Sprite)]

Goddamn, that flow tho.

[Sad Acoustic Thingy]

Gorgeous.

[WORLD WAR - Felix Zophar x Jorn L x Rouge x Scorpiioh]

Oh, this is BEAUTIFUL.

FelixZophar responds:

Thank you lol

[Sixth Floor]

At 1:08 I notice there's a quiet spot. I love those quiet drops, but I feel it had to be too short because you lacked something to put there: lyrics. If you ever want somebody to add vocals to this, just extend that quiet section a bit and I'd be more than willing and excited to collaborate.

P.S. I can tell you got those elevator bytes from live recording, and whether you did it yourself or downloaded them, they add a very real vibe to the track and I wanna give you props for being so creative.

[S'Up]

Good work on this one. For real.

[Samurai Ninja]

Oh yeah. You're on to something.

[It's fine]

This is really quite enticing. The only thing that precludes me from becoming inspired enough to write vocals on this is the song structure; or rather, the lack thereof. It’s sort of like half-soft and then half-hardcore.

My recommendation is breaking the two up and staggering them in a format that is closer to this;

Intro, Chorus, Verse, Chorus, Verse, Bridge, Chorus, Outro

Obviously, this would potentially cause the track to be longer, but it would also improve its quality and make it a thing I’m willing to work with you on.

The sound quality is EPIC, man! I love what you’ve got going on here with the chugging bass and guitar, the theramin-style synth and the jungle sounds. Compelling for sure! Very high quality! It only lacks structure.