NeoAlchemist247's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Cruel Reality]

Hey man; first off- I understand what happened to you in school, man. People are sheisty.

As far as this song goes- good work. I can tell it comes from deep inside you, and the message hits pretty hard. I think your rhymes are good and the beat bumps fine, but it feels rushed near the end. I do the same thing in my own music sometimes. I have to remind myself that a rest is actually a musical device and space between phrases can be alright if done correctly.

But no, for real, if it sounds like how you want it to sound- then it sounds right. Thanks for a quality piece of music, man.

-DJDj

[Goombajabari]

Lmao. This is hilarious. XD

-DJDj

Willanatior responds:

:D Glad you enjoyed it

[The Gate]

I'd give this five stars if my laptop was actually allowing me to. I keep getting some weird error. But for real- this is quality work. I dig the atmospheric vibe to it, and the piano works well. If somebody were to write good lyrics, this could go somewhere.

Error104 responds:

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

[Mystery - W.I.P]

Good work, man. I like the effects you use at certain times, and you seem like you synch up with the emotion of the track really well. I thought the flow could've been a bit better, to be honest, though, bro. I felt like you were offbeat a couple times, and it also seemed like you tried to push too many syllables into a line once, maybe twice. Keep at it- you've got a good voice for rap, and you're great at beats. Sorry I didnt actually get to do this one with you, man. I had a rap written for it and everything. :/

-DJDj

P.S.- Trust SynthGoddess- she's an epic singer.

SinZLazTWordZ responds:

I really appreciate your thoughts man. I feel like this was just the start to something bigger and I hope to keep it moving forward. I got some more instrumentals lined up and some more lyrics written down. We can always do a remix to this or even get you in on the 2nd verse. It is still empty right now, I might re-record a few things as well to try to fit the flow a bit better.
I will keep at it though man, I hope to see you around more often and maybe get a collab in there with ya bro.

Thanks for the review man.

Tech

[Where to go]

I love the epic feel of this track. It has SERIOUS potential. I think it needs more wubwub in the wubwub sections, though. I don't feel like it takes over the track at those parts like it should. Still beautiful, just like... It /wants/ to be dubstep, but it's not quite there yet, yaknow?

[Liquid Ice]

This is a gorgeous standalone piece. I used the old version, though. The WIP. You raised the pitch, as well as the tempo. Hadn't expected the tempo change, and it didn't really do well with the vocals we have. Sounds awesome, though. I love on that piano work, I really do. Great stuff!

-DJDj

[All I Had (vocal demo)]

Woah. I'd love to you on a track. Great work. I'm speechless.

-DJDj

SynthGoddess responds:

Thank you, thank you. I'm actually thinking about finishing it? Maybe?

[When Everything Changes]

Wow, man. This is just beautiful. I'll be using this soon, for sure. Keep up the awesomeness, dude. You rock!

-DJDj

[Chain]

Wow, this is pretty great. It's very upbeat and rave-esque. I am consistently impressed by the music you release. I dunno where you come up with these melodies- but don't stop being original with each one, it's really refreshing.

-DJDj

[Abused Authority]

I'm thinking "Respect. I want to right a song on this track."

-DJDj

SynthGoddess responds:

You're awesome ! As always, thanks so much for the kind words. :)